[Standards] LAST CALL: XEP-0166 (Jingle)

[Bernd Fondermann]

XMPP Extensions Editor wrote:
> This message constitutes notice of a Last Call for comments on XEP-0166 (Jingle).
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> Abstract: This document defines a framework for initiating and managing peer-to-peer multimedia sessions (e.g., voice and video chat) between two Jabber/XMPP endpoints in a way that is interoperable with existing Internet standards.
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> URL: http://www.xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0166.html
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> This Last Call begins today and shall end at the close of business on 2007-12-14.
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> Please consider the following questions during this Last Call and send your feedback to the standards at xmpp.org discussion list:
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> 1. Is this specification needed to fill gaps in the XMPP protocol stack or to clarify an existing protocol?
> 2. Does the specification solve the problem stated in the introduction and requirements?
> 3. Do you plan to implement this specification in your code? If not, why not?
> 4. Do you have any security concerns related to this specification?
> 5. Is the specification accurate and clearly written?
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> Your feedback is appreciated!

Two smaller nitpickings for section 1. ...

"with the negotiation being completed XMPP" - for my 
english-as-a-foreign-language ears a word or two seems to be missing 
after 'completed'. maybe "over", "using" or "inside"?

"but building in support for these features" - I am very unsure about 
'building in'. it sounds strange to me in this context, "built-in" 
sounded better.

WDYM?

   Bernd