[webteam] progress

[Peter Saint-Andre]

Robert Martinez wrote:
> I think Adam is right concerning the clarity of the text experience.
> While every page is a great starting point there seems to be room for
> making it more "absorbable" or more "streamlined", unfortunately people
> are absolutely lazy when they have to read.
> Using visuals to emphasize would be great, and I probably will work on
> that kind of stuff if the page is up and running.
> 
> Never the less I would go online with the text as it is now.

I agree that things are too wordy right now. Simplify, simplify,
simplify. :) Those pages were a first pass. I will try to shorten the
text when I have time.

As Blaise Pascal said:

"I would have written a shorter letter, but I did not have the time."

:)

Graphics would be cool too, but I am a graphics idiot.

Peter

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Peter Saint-Andre
https://stpeter.im/

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