[Standards] LAST CALL: XEP-0166 (Jingle)

Peter Saint-Andre stpeter at stpeter.im
Tue Nov 27 21:04:42 UTC 2007


Bernd Fondermann wrote:

> Two smaller nitpickings for section 1. ...
> 
> "with the negotiation being completed XMPP" - for my
> english-as-a-foreign-language ears a word or two seems to be missing
> after 'completed'. maybe "over", "using" or "inside"?
> 
> "but building in support for these features" - I am very unsure about
> 'building in'. it sounds strange to me in this context, "built-in"
> sounded better.

Clarified (I hope):

http://svn.xmpp.org:18080/browse/XMPP/trunk/extensions/xep-0166.xml?r1=1420&r2=1426

Peter

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