[Standards] LAST CALL: XEP-0166 (Jingle)

Bernd Fondermann bf_lists at brainlounge.de
Tue Nov 27 21:18:29 UTC 2007


Peter Saint-Andre wrote:
> Bernd Fondermann wrote:
> 
>> Two smaller nitpickings for section 1. ...
>>
>> "with the negotiation being completed XMPP" - for my
>> english-as-a-foreign-language ears a word or two seems to be missing
>> after 'completed'. maybe "over", "using" or "inside"?
>>
>> "but building in support for these features" - I am very unsure about
>> 'building in'. it sounds strange to me in this context, "built-in"
>> sounded better.
> 
> Clarified (I hope):
> 
> http://svn.xmpp.org:18080/browse/XMPP/trunk/extensions/xep-0166.xml?r1=1420&r2=1426

+1

thanks,

   Bernd



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